Now I hope you like this because I worked really hard on it.
It is our dedication
that deports our
children to their deaths-
is the only way
toward other domains-
the innocent will
but it is ok,
because it is
poem is like Feringhetti’s in that we both use satire to prove our point. We use satire to show that people do not care
about the evils of the world as long as it does not affect them directly. Another similarity is the subject, which I stated
before. The approach of both our poems to the subject is more direct; neither uses a lot of symbolism.